Help please by warlady21

First off, read the story I wrote called “OK, I posted this.” I calmed down about it, and I would like to get respones about it.

and second, because I was bored out of my skull and coudln’t find anything decent to read, I made the mistake of looking up Legends of Zelda Yaoi fanfictions. And….god….

to put it shortly: it was too soft cored. it was pathatic how they put these two guys, who are enemies, into sweety pie relationships. So i’m writing a retaliation fanfiction that pulls out all the gross stops.

I need help with what to put in there, and came up with two things: feet being chopped off at the ankels, and one eye being tore out and the socekt turned itno a fuck hole.

any suggestions on what else to throw in here to piss people off woudl be nice and be REALLY helpful.

~EDIT~ Nevermind. I just recalled the last time I did something like that, everyone ended up likeing it. don’t want that to happen again. but I would like to have those suggestions stiill. I want to finish it now. maybe I’ll put the P.O.S. on here. heh.

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good idea.

ALthough I should mention that it’ll be a long while before I can get any of that down. My computer litterly blew up, so I have one on loan.

damn kids snuck a firecracker inside. How they managed that is beyond me.