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Author Topic: Hot Day (Beheading|F-victim|Nonconsensual|Compliant bondage|Necrophilia)  (Read 290 times)

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It was so hot that day, and everything was closed. The two girls stared at the ceiling fan, bored out of their minds.

Karen: "There's nothing to do. Maybe there's something on TV?"
Willa: "We already checked. Watching these stupid things is more boring than doing nothing."
Karen: "We've tried this 'nothing', too."
Willa: "You know... A house down the street has a pool. Not a tub, a real, pretty large pool."
Karen: "Do you know the ones who live there?"
Willa: "No, I saw the water reflecting on the house once and decided to sneak a peak. It looked nice in there. So... Are you coming?"

They quickly pulled off their sweaty clothes and slipped into bikini bottoms and sandals. Willa took two towels and they left.

After reaching the house, the two topless girls stood in front of the gate; Karen rang the doorbell and put her hands behind her back, smiling.

There was no answer.

Willa: "I don't hear anything."

She rang again, longer.

Karen: "Damn it."

They examined what of the house they could see. Karen saw water reflecting on the house's second floor.

Karen: "There's the pool. How did you say you saw it?"
Willa: "I climbed on the mailbox, using that tree. Actually, hold this."

She gave her the towels and climbed, looking over the fence.

Karen: "Come down before someone sees you."
Willa: "Did you see anyone else?"
Karen: "Well, still."

Willa was silent for a while.

Willa: "There's stuff here to climb back outside on."
Karen: "You mean..."
Willa: "Yes, what's the worst that could happen? Even if they come back, I'm sure they won't mind."
Karen: "...Okay."

Karen threw the towels over the fence. Willa climbed inside and helped her follow.

The pool was full and clean. Willa immediately took the towels down, took off her sandals, ran to the pool and jumped in. Karen went to the shower stand and rinsed. She felt the gentle wind cooling her body.

An hour later, the girls were lying on their towels, relaxing in the sun. Suddenly they heard a man clearing his throat; they opened their eyes to see him standing over them, angry. They immediately got up.

Man: "You are trespassing on my private property. Are you aware of that?"
Willa: "We are very sorry, sir, but it was so hot, we just used the pool and the show.."
Man: "Do you know what the law entitles homeowners to these days? Trespassers forfeit all protection."
Willa: "We promise we won't do it again."
Man: "You will do what I think is necessary, and maybe I won't need to call the police."

The man produced a plastic cuff from his pocket.

Man: "While I check that you didn't take or break anything. Turn around."

Worryingly, Willa presented her wrists behind her back. As he cuffed her, Karen ran toward the fence. He pursued.

Willa: "Just do what he says!"

Karen slipped and almost fell, and when she reached the fence she realized something was moved, and she couldn't climb it quickly. She went around the pool back to the other side to find another way, but the man jumped on her and pinned her to the earth, pressing against her.

Karen: "Let go! You have no right to do this!"
Man: "This is my house and I can do whatever I want."

He cuffed her and dragged her to a pipe, then connected her to it with another cuff. He gestured Willa and she allowed him to do the same to her. They were now on their knees, unable to escape. He departed.

Karen: "I shouldn't have listened to you."
Willa: "Relax, okay? It'll be fine."

The man came back with a machete and placed it on the floor nearby. They looked at it.

Man: "To free you later. Now... Do you understand what you did? I am very protective of what's mine, but all I want in return is a little compensation."

He groped Willa's breast. She looked at him, indignant.

Man: "You understand. But I much prefer her."

He groped Karen's breasts. She resisted.

Karen: "Get off!"

Man: "Hmm. I'll have to rid of this first."

He took the machete, grabbed Karen's hair, pulled her head back, and after a second of begging chopped it off. Willa cried out as his hand swung backwards with it. Karen's headless body spasmed violently as if it was trying to escape, shooting blood like a hose. Willa jerked as some if got on her. The body finally slumped forward, now only panting, the slow bleeding flowing over her chest and trickling down from her nipples.

He threw Karen's head to the side. Willa was horrified, and could not say anything. She saw his erection as he took off his clothes; He crouched in front of Karen's body, reaching the cuff to cut it, pushing against her breast with his in the process. Her body slid off of him and fell to the floor; He flipped it over, dragged it a little bit farther, pulled off the bikini bottom, and Willa watched as he got his compensation.
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Re: Hot Day (Beheading|F-victim|Nonconsensual|Compliant bondage|Necrophilia)
« Reply #1 on: January 01, 2012, 09:56:01 AM »

Very lovely. I'd like a bit more detail on the ending, it seems rushed for what is my favorite part, but still very enjoyable.
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Re: Hot Day (Beheading|F-victim|Nonconsensual|Compliant bondage|Necrophilia)
« Reply #2 on: January 01, 2012, 12:33:40 PM »

Thanks. And could you please correct a sentence from the second-to-last paragraph? "Willa jerked as some if got on her" should be "Willa jerked as some of it got on her".
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Re: Hot Day (Beheading|F-victim|Nonconsensual|Compliant bondage|Necrophilia)
« Reply #3 on: January 01, 2012, 07:51:35 PM »

Thanks. And could you please correct a sentence from the second-to-last paragraph? "Willa jerked as some if got on her" should be "Willa jerked as some of it got on her".

You can do it yourself by clicking on the "Modify" button in the upper right of the original post.
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Re: Hot Day (Beheading|F-victim|Nonconsensual|Compliant bondage|Necrophilia)
« Reply #4 on: January 02, 2012, 01:43:48 AM »

Hunter-Seeker: An enjoyable and well written very short story, although I do join t'Sade in pleading for more detain at the climatic moment. Thanks and best wishes.  lens
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Re: Hot Day (Beheading|F-victim|Nonconsensual|Compliant bondage|Necrophilia)
« Reply #5 on: January 04, 2012, 04:47:02 AM »

Thank you. Hmm. I got a similar comment elsewhere, I'll think more into that.

You can do it yourself by clicking on the "Modify" button in the upper right of the original post.

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Re: Hot Day (Beheading|F-victim|Nonconsensual|Compliant bondage|Necrophilia)
« Reply #6 on: January 17, 2012, 10:34:00 PM »

While I'm a detailed demise kind of writer, I actually liked the swift, sudden style to this ending - to me it just fits, stylistically.  Sure, fetish-wise one might be disappointed, but in terms of pure storytelling, it works. :)
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